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" Holes " |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
The words become a focal point, an image wraps around. The center forms a hole through which one feels they're sliding down. It's tenuous , at best, this link between two different planes, for nothing ever seems complete,we're left with what remains. The bits and pieces that appear, hand strewn, along these lines, may only skim the surface of the depths one would define. An errant ray of hope persists, to light this dim recess, illuminating different signs within this emptiness. Where words become a focal point an image wraps around, that never seem at all comlete, nor, even that profound. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Where words become a focal point an image wraps around, that never seem at all complete, nor, even that profound. wow, outstanding thoughts and write... chuckling at your critique about retreading old tires...only cuz I'm working in the tire industry..  |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Doughnuts! Now that's a hole I can really get into! For what's a hole without one of these delicious frames to surround it? "Nothing," I say. So make my hole a delicious chocolate glazed. And by the way... Got milk? Oh, and one more thing... Have you ever wondered what the whole hole looks like? Think about it. I still love your style Doc. Peace. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Doc "The bits and pieces that appear, hand strewn, along these lines, may only skim the surface of the depths one would define." I wish I had written this poem!!  |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Where words become a focal point an image wraps around, that never seem at all comlete, nor, even that profound says it all * you left out a "p" in complete  M |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Doc! I'd quote my favorite part but see no point to pasting the entire write into my reply. Sorry I haven't read you in so long espicially now that I am reminded how much I enjoy your writing. This is fabulous. Thank you sir for sharing. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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wandering glider Senior Member
since 2001-04-04
Posts 501aloft |
A poet's poem. Nice one, Sir. Glad I stopped by for a read tonight. |
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