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Stuck With Us Blues (song)
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Stuck With Us Blues (song) |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana 
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Hey... at least I spare y'all hearing my singing! LOL You can tell me you don’t love me You can cheat You can deceive You can tell me you don’t love me But I never will believe When I look into your eyes I know that you will never leave. You can tell me you don’t love me Any woman Can take my place You can tell me you don’t love me But you haven’t got the grace To look right into my eyes And tell those lies straight to my face. You can tell me you don’t love me You can slip On out the door You can tell me you don’t love me But you’ll soon be back for more And I’ll look into your eyes Open my arms just like before. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
you don't want to hear me sing either....  so I'll just hum along....this is excellent... |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
riveting...what we woman will do for the love we feel...talk about dedicated huh? Well done, I felt this one right down to the marrow... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"You can tell me you don’t love me You can slip On out the door You can tell me you don’t love me But you’ll soon be back for more And I’ll look into your eyes Open my arms just like before." Lovin' this one gal! Should be put to music! I especially enjoyed the closing stanza.. great ending!! Hugs~Nancy Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SweetSuthernSongstress~ I LOVE IT ... hey, how's about I sing it and Bill guitars it and SEA hums it ???? Purty pweeze~ Love you gal~ *Huglets*  ~*Me*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Hey...I know this song...(different tune and lyrics, but just the same blues?)...and, you don't want to hear me sing it either...... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
omg Suthern gal....this hits home to me on such a veryyyy personal level... are we sharing the same mirror today...oh...or, did you peak into my journal!!! lol and btw, I know I would rather hear you sing it than me!! lol.. nicely done lady! and I do believe this is a  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
suthern Well done,  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Ive heard your laugh...so I know you can sing  your muse just did a fine job ... so maybe you two should call ethome and get to wailing those blues.  |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
hey, I'll sing it with ya! who cares what our voices sound like? gravel has been selling well for years |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Awe girl, just sing! My daughters try to shelter both their ears and eyes when I sing and dance through the house. That doesn't stop me. So, I say sing your song, Suthern girl, sing your song! Patricia |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
SEA: Hum loud enough to drown me out, wouldja please? *G* Thank you so much! *S* LeeJ: I'm so glad you liked this... I was afraid it was too simple without the music... so your "riveting" means much to me... Thank you! *S* Enchantress: It's got the music... just lacks a singer! LOL Thank you so much! *S* Marge: That sounds like a grand deal to me! *S* Thank you, my friend! *S* Toerag: Wanna bet??? LOL When I play it in my head, I hear Gaye singing it... the sound is quite different when the voice is mine. LOL Thank you so much! GS: I think our journals have very similar chapters. *S* But to be honest... I'm not sure where this one came from... it woke me up insisting on "being." *S* Thank you!!! Seymour: Thank you, dear friend... SMOOCH! *S* JM: Even though I disagree that one follows the other, you make me want to hear the laughter of some of my favorite singers. *G* "Wail" is the operative term, yanno! LOL Thank you so much... and I'm game if ethome is! *G* Midnitesun: ROFL @ gravel... I love that! LOL Okay... we'll have a choir! *G* Thank you so much! *S* Patricia: I do... but since I sing LOUDLY when I sing the blues, I confine it to the car! *G* Thank you so much!!! *S* I appreciate all of you for your kind comments... don't know why my muse wanted to sing through the night... but she did. LOL |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
suthern, I have just enough time to comment on one poem tonight, and I love the one I chose! It's got a great rhythm and is song many can relate to! Hope all is going well. Take care. You sing and write those blues, oh so well! miscellanea |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
miscellanea: With all the poems posted here every day, I can't think of a greater compliment than that you chose mine... I thank you from the bottom of my heart! *S* |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
I like your little experiments -- sometimes you just blossom in them! Keep trying the new stuff, but don't leave your beautiful free verse behind, eh? .....I can't catch the tune in this one --I'm no good at that kind of thing -- so I found myself making up my own, yep! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Ratleader: I'm betting your version sounds MUCH better than mine. *S* Thank you so much, my friend... |
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