Open Poetry #36 |
Lost to the Stars |
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Re Post Lost to the Stars To stars that diamond up above I need the lust of Van Gogh’s love Colors of Renoir’s detailed thrust Without Picasso’s holocaust A touch of dotted Surat’s din A scene that grabs and draws you in A palette dripping vibrant hue That shows a world of painted new. A canvas full of optic flow A painting full of primal glow That makes you care and come aware That holds you still and makes you stare. It is a wish and not a dream A palette full of painters scheme All painted with desires brush And stroked with magic of its lush. But alas it will not cast, for The hourglass draws near the last. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
To stars that diamond up above I need the lust of Van Gogh’s love Colors of Renoir’s detailed thrust Without Picasso’s holocaust an hour may be a lifetime, and you sir, gift my febal brain, with many lifetimes...and oh, by the way, you got all the lust, colors and detailed thrusts and more!!!!!!! Hugs and good morning... |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
" A canvas full of optic flow A painting full of primal glow That makes you care and come aware That holds you still and makes you stare." This is like tuning in to an easy listening radio station, nice music, Seemore... ------------ice/ford ><> |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Your palette of words created wonderful images on this morning's canvas Sy. Well done indeed!! believe in what your heart feels... |
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yv Senior Member
since 2003-05-30
Posts 574 |
Brilliant. I could...feel each image. Beautiful! Yv-Goddess of Her Domain. Symbol of Truth Passion Pain. Let Her Smile Rain on the Hearts of the Innocent. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful wonderful Sy.. You couldn't have choosen a more beautiful piece for a repost. I absolutely love this one! Have a prace-filled day. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
A canvas full of optic flow A painting full of primal glow That makes you care and come aware That holds you still and makes you stare. Excellent m'friend.... |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is one of your most beautiful, my friend... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy "It is a wish and not a dream A palette full of painters scheme All painted with desires brush And stroked with magic of its lush." and, you do it every time!! |
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