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latelyluv New Member
since 2005-07-09
Posts 5AR, United States |
Upset, down and out Wait a minute let me tell you What it's all about I've been hurt several times before But now, I don't know what to do All at one time People talkin' 'bout me, hatin' on me, judgin' me criticizin' me, I'm only 16 can't the people see. People make mistakes That dosen't mean you can make it hard on them. Like, Love, Friendship What type of positon is this You've told me what love meant I had to open my eyes and see I wasn't a murderer I was in love To the power times three I had to open up, create some thing, do some things, Believe All things are possible But now you sittin in my face Like you some judgementive apostle I've wrote plenty before You acted like you didn't see Now you're lying on the floor in dis-grace A face I can't believe But remember all things are possible I've had my black gloves on the entire time So pick your heart up because this love was just too Blind |
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The One & Only Member
since 2005-01-26
Posts 58Kansas USA |
I really like this poem at first i though of being 16 again and remembering this i had forgotten, and as the ending came near it took me someplace else! Very nice! thanks |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
KNow the feeling hun, But remember it is not the mistakes we make, but how we redeem our selves that make us who we are. As teenagers we make mistakes, but often these mistakes affect the restr of our lives. So be wise my friend and redeem your self. For it is mistakes that we are humans, but with out failing we can never learn. -Juju Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic |
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