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The Turning of Soul
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The Turning of Soul |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind 
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{and then silence} Exhaling amber and sky The image --how it feels to adore this world you gently haunt Still winter holds my heart pressed to glass, I speak of rain and soaked memories, of this sea & that you may know the moment the center chips of salt desire of thirst &colors among earth held in longing sipping nectar with out speech orchids of being enduring darkness Tracing edges of wings blue --perhaps a touch of red -- motion of breathing this breathing -- listen we, at heart here palms pressed stars unseen endless shattered ‘peaces’ clearer dreams of water that we may hear falling petals letting music follow he too alone – what might be your words if we could hear them? the turning of soulwhen midnight arrives softly still, beautiful for his touch his darkness becoming something I need against my skin In your light I learn how to love In your beauty how to make poems You dance inside my chest where no one sees you and that sight becomes this art |
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Warbler New Member
since 2005-07-09
Posts 8 |
You paint a vibrant picture of longing here. Lucky "he" is... |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
awesome~ My spirit will rise |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Still winter holds my heart pressed to glass then this - oh my Lauren... you may know the moment the center chips of salt desire of thirst &colors among earth held in longing sipping nectar with out speech Lord, have mercy girl ... his darkness becoming something I need against my skin I do believe I just now this second did a "Janet Marie" with all felt in this poem. This was exquisite, and I felt that longing I tell you.  |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
WOW! Lauren, just Wow! to the library. Mxx  take bread away from me, if you wish, take air away. but do not take from me your laughter. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Sweetie, you know that everything you write lands softly in my heart, but this... damn Lauren... moved me.  sweet sis. Miss youGive me your heart Make it real Or else forget about it...Santana |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
The image --how it feels to adore this world you gently haunt ~*~ May have to borrow the feel of this, someday... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oh, Lauren... your whisper-soft words are written with such sweet longing...  Linda |
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yv Senior Member
since 2003-05-30
Posts 574 |
Oh...wow...words...I am truly at a loss for them. That was spellbinding! Yv-Goddess of Her Domain. Symbol of Truth Passion Pain. Let Her Smile Rain on the Hearts of the Innocent. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Your incredible talent of touching the reader's heart, is shown here once again dear Lauren. Beautiful this.. Lovely you.. Hugs~Nancy Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
my sentiments exactly, only wish I were able to write them as you do...extremely magnificant |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
The image --how it feels to adore this world you gently haunt Still winter holds my heart pressed to glass, I speak of rain and soaked memories, of this sea & that you may know the moment the center chips of salt desire ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Tracing edges of wings blue --perhaps a touch of red -- motion of breathing this breathing -- listen we, at heart here palms pressed stars unseen endless shattered ‘peaces’ clearer dreams of water that we may hear falling petals letting music follow he too alone – what might be your words if we could hear them? the turning of soulwhen midnight arrives softly still, beautiful for his touch his darkness becoming something I need against my skin ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ oh darlin... you take me breath away .... *sigh* yesssssss ...you define the spiritual touching of souls, held in the most holy part of the heart. another stunning write me butterfly goddess.  "It is the peculiar quality of a fool to perceive the faults of others and to forget their own". |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
This was beautiful, my friend. Without a doubt. j. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Another Greeneyes poem, another lesson in how to make poetry work.... this one in how to write with class..... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Tracing edges of wings blue --perhaps a touch of red -- motion of breathing this breathing -- listen we, at heart here palms pressed stars unseen endless shattered ‘peaces’ clearer dreams of water that we may hear falling petals letting music follow he too alone – what might be your words if we could hear them? the turning of soulwhen midnight arrives *sigh* just had to breath this one in again lovely lady. Speaking of lovely, dang that new pic is sooooo lovely! I adore it, as I do your words!  sis. |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
 "There is always some madness in love. But there is also always some reason in madness." -Friedrich Nietzsche |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
It just turns out .... that I never did reply ... here that souls linger in the dark butterflies flutter more in a contained area amber and sky inhaled makes my day my soul can be moved .... Luvs CT |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Hi Craig... appreciate those butterflies....amber and sky inhaled....hugsss you...  luv you... |
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