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Twilight |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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And as I ran In a dream Carrying you in my arms The world was no more— The sun—did not move |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
John, this imagery certainly leaves much to interpretation. Perhaps it's just the moment, but I read this as sad. |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
Write some more It is too good to just stop Bodger |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I do love your poetry, although quite often I find myself wishing you'd go on... (and coincidentally, I've a framed print on my wall that conveys this a maked similarity to this image.) Enjoyed.  |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
beautiful, beautiful!!! |
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