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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
Few people ever come to see an old man and his cat Cat doesn’t seem to like it and scat People only came because they feel That life here isn’t an image It is really real Cat knows herself Curled up by the tree No one sees Cat Unless she feels depth And then Cat rises Walking on claws And you think deeply, quickly About Cat and her paws And I must do something about her breath |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Cute.. This must be for Kaile's chalange right? Good job. -Juju Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
No. Cat is really a woman who chooses her shape and her ideas. Bodger |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Profound. Enjoyed. SG |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Cat knows herself ~*~ Yes, she does! |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
Another fine piece. :-) <^^> Today the pond....Tomorrow the world |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This is a joy.  I'm enjoying the fresh perceptions from your pen. thank you |
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yv Senior Member
since 2003-05-30
Posts 574 |
HaHa. That was very nice...the last line had me tickled a bit. But the whole poem was a delight to read! Yv-Goddess of Her Domain. Symbol of Truth Passion Pain. Let Her Smile Rain on the Hearts of the Innocent. |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
cute one My spirit will rise |
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