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An Affair
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An Affair |
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evomx5 Member
since 2005-07-11
Posts 52Atlanta, GA |
Three quick taps upon his door Tells him that she’s back for more Lustful feelings hidden deep Secrets that she couldn’t keep This affair she cannot hide Leaves her feeling weak inside Flush of face, pounding heart Thinking of their time apart Standing on the other side Regretful of this lusting ride He keeps his silence as she waits Hoping he can change their fates This can’t go on, this love affair Leading them to who knows where Down an unfamiliar path To a pit of lovers past Three more knocks, she calls his name Realizing it’s all in vain She turns around to walk away A single teardrop goes astray A salty taste upon her lips Grabs her heart and fiercely rips A lover’s plight once more revealed Another heart will never heal. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
well done...heart tugging visuals here...  |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Sea said it best, it was heart tugging alright, and always is when you are caught up in deceit. Someone always gets hurt when they take a bite of the "apple."  Well done Mike. |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
yes it sure leaves the ache in the heart Hope |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
know this ache~ My spirit will rise |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Love is so beautiful, but it can leave scars when its mistreated. Here's one of my smileys (=p). God bless. -GIS Romans 8:28 "And we know that God causes everything to work together for the good of those who love God and are called according to his purposes |
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Jeep Monkey Member
since 2005-12-18
Posts 96Chaos |
I don't get it. I really don't. How a man can have an adulterous affair, and be okay in his brain. But what I really don't understand is the woman who can be a part of an affair, and be okay with it, too. There's always another story, another side. But from where I sit, I just can't understand it. |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
i understand this write it is a good one too ,people need to open there minds up and not be so closed . nice work , people are born free in this world and don't let anyone ever tell you different , no matter who it is , we all have the right to do what are hearts desire and not what someones religion or the way they were raised pressure or change your true feelings , when you repress it only does harm later on , so i say let them play , merry christmas all |
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majnu
since 2002-10-13
Posts 1088SF Bay Area |
well done. -majnu |
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jinx26 Junior Member
since 2005-12-12
Posts 38Jersey |
I toally have experienced this. lovedit |
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