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autumn breeze (repost for Ford)
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autumn breeze (repost for Ford) |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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Surprised, I knew, like a tickling sneeze, twitching in my nose. I saw your eyes, so much like mine... (yes, I think they were my own.) How can this be? An Autumn breeze, dusting blood-sweat from my brow... I need to build a kite to fly if I can remember how. Calloused feet, stifling heat-- we need a blanket spread. There--a magnolia, come, and I'll show you a place to rest your head. Autumn breeze, don't tease me, please, (we both know it's July) Two pairs of feet grip hot streets as four eyes search the sky. This moment now let's make no vows while these Autumn breezes blow... I'll be content with no intent of malice when you go. Changes of season are instinct--not reason-- let us build a kite and float, before winter freezes, turn sweet breezes into cold familiar snow. Then I'll desire the heat of a fire, searching for a warmer coat. Shivering, remembering, how Autumn breezes blow.  |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karen "How can this be? An Autumn breeze, dusting blood-sweat from my brow... I need to build a kite to fly if I can remember how." You'll remember...it's like this:  It’s in a grace that feels the pull though just a string it catches fold of how the current speaks like dance and hand on small of back just so seduces the movement into flow  |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Serenity Thank you for posting this....  "Autumn breeze, don't tease me, please, (we both know it's July)" The heat broke here a little, was 53 this morning, and I swear the breeze had the scent of autumn in it....perhaps it was the lower humidity that made it fresh on the skin, like the air on an October day. but "we both know it is July" and the heat is not over, not complaining, mind you after all, Relief does not exist without discomfort.. enjoyed -----------ice/ford ><> Martie Love your comment.... |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Love the write Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
sighh I wish it were autumn... beautiful m'lady mxx take bread away from me, if you wish, take air away. but do not take from me your laughter. |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
I love this. I am definitely going back for another read... Patrica |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Two pairs of feet grip hot streets as four eyes search the sky. This moment now let's make no vows while these Autumn breezes blow... ~*~ Aye, you dare not... lest you curse the day with a sound... I'm glad that ice wrote... that we were able to see this, again... and Martie's words, too! |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"Autumn breeze, don't tease me, please, (we both know it's July) Two pairs of feet grip hot streets as four eyes search the sky" It feels like someone just brushed my hair.  love you lady."too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Awesome write Karen.. So much enjoyed the read..and the replies on this steamy summer day.. Love ya lady~ Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
This one has me enchanted, Karen. Put together so cleverly! ....jo |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Karen, know it or not, you fly kites everytime you place a word down on these blue pages for us...outstanding vision you have, not to mention, a very precious heart. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
regardles of the intent of what is behind this write, Karen, this is most beautiful and eloquent and it truly meant so very much to me this morning, as well. Thank you. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Karen, I don't know how many times I may have told you this before, but this is my favorite of yours now. I'm going to keep it in my Serenity folder, so I can find it quicker. It felt like a breathe of fresh air came floating by. Thank you for sharing your talents with us. Heart Hugs, Ethel |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Something tells me you opened the doors and windows, or you must be getting close to that point? Awesome dudette. |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
grin thank you for this reposting for ice this is differnt for ya and I likes it! and you dont mind if I had some personal innarest? smile great my lady |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
t'lu my dawlin' |
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