Open Poetry #36 |
Subliminal |
ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Subliminal The heat that radiates the rose Brought by scent It glistens far into the afterglow As dawn reveals herself In thoughts that quicken pulse Illuminate the dalliance of hope And heart To matter from a theme of dream By making way of wild things Found tame and vibrant Giving dimension and range In deeper connections let linger As mist upon the eyes So sweet The hand remembers form and texture Truly to be one Yet this is what exceeds the rhyme Completes design A chord of fire to crescendo Left as gift to Eden From the soul to bloom As love Copyright Kkh 07/04/05 |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"A chord of fire to crescendo" ~love that!~ thank you for another delightfully poetic read! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
lovely, as usual love the ending |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
very, very nice TD - |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
Good words Bodger |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"The hand remembers form and texture Truly to be one Yet this is what exceeds the rhyme Completes design " Kathleen, this is a wonderful poem....sorry, I missed it earlier. It needs a boot up. ....jo |
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Sharksbean Member
since 2005-09-25
Posts 368jax |
this was just incredibly beautiful im glad you shared this with us thank you . -may the force be with you in poetry |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kathleen~ 'The hand remembers form and texture Truly to be one Yet this is what exceeds the rhyme Completes design A chord of fire to crescendo Left as gift to Eden From the soul to bloom As love' *sigh* ... this is another inked beauty from you~ I sure thank Jo~ for giving it a lift~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*No matter what I search for ... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Yes, this is well worth another round! Excellent write, dear TD! Love, Margherita |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful writing Kathleen.. Hugs~Nancy ~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile.~ |
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