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nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2005-07-23 09:59 AM

to feel this hostility
a flow of words
to meet those of another's
biting a tongue-not...
for a loathing grows
from the same seed
making his importance
disappear from these lips
better used for kissing
M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2005-07-23 11:19 AM

wow! this is so great....

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

2 posted 2005-07-23 01:00 PM

quote:
disappear from these lips
better used for kissing

haha, i had to laugh at these lines. very good rationale as to resist retaliation and this was a delightful unexpected ending!

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

3 posted 2005-07-24 12:16 PM

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

4 posted 2005-07-24 04:44 AM

Words said
Causing tears shed,
Instead
Of needed words,
Those heard
Burn fiercely
Hurt dearly
Sent to soft fleeing
And crying,
So you go
Rightfully so.

Gloom

yv
Senior Member

since 2003-05-30

Posts 574

5 posted 2005-07-24 07:22 PM

Powerful words. I thought this was very lovely...and as corny as it sounds...overwhelmingly meaningful!

Yv-Goddess of Her Domain. Symbol of Truth Passion Pain. Let Her Smile Rain on the Hearts of the Innocent.

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

6 posted 2005-07-25 05:27 PM

thank you, I was just overly tired and venting a bit...realizing how I was being taken advantage of by a sibling after 9 days of helping out...he biting his tongue so he said, and me...well biting not...leaving abruptly and coming home to a somewhat lonely though peaceful place.

M

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

7 posted 2005-07-25 09:52 PM

And shame on you if those lips aren't being used for kissing! This is excellent. Peace.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

8 posted 2005-07-25 10:15 PM

quote:
coming home to a somewhat lonely though peaceful place.

quote:
All I want is a room somewhere...
far away from the midnight air...

now hum with me..hmmm hmmmm hmmmmmm hmmm hmmmmm hmmmmm

quote:
now would....n't it.... be loverly...

loverly,....

loverly....

loverly....

Holding you close...
[I'm about to post a little confused rant
of my own,
but I doubt it will make as much sense
as yours!]

Proud of you, gal!

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