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Shrugs from an Obliviate
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Shrugs from an Obliviate |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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I could peek a lift of veil as surely as a fingernail searches for an edge of scab itching curiosity in garner of the leverage of what lies beneath the skin confessional of sin but then? I could bleed to death. so I allow devout deformity- scars at times becomingly billowing the papacy of things I shouldn't seek and that is all I really need to know. |
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Alicat Member Elite
since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094Coastal Texas |
I'm reminded of the apocryphal story of the French monk who prayed and prayed to know the true name of God. One night his prayers were answered. Then he spent the rest of his life praying to forget. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
*smile* I don't wanna know either. I've got the kind of mind that would immediately say that name backwards, because it's precisely what you ain't supposed t'do!   Get some sleep bro. I ain't about to undo all of creation. zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
There it is again, that grit, that gritty selection of words, coase as if sanded with 60 grit sandpaper...across the grain! But if a reader looks close they can see it is polished to smooth finish with 220.....  Ever do any carpentry, Serenity? enjoyed ------------ice/ford ><> |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
serenity, I too love to paddle my feet in the running brook.  |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
Lemme ponder on this a bit more...I keep flashbacking to when I was 6 and stuck my finger in a light socket...I tend to do things I shouldnt  Need I say more...lovely envoking poem here..tho doubtful it was supposed to envoke such a dorky confession LOL If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
itching curiosity someone once told me recently I was a bit too curious and you know what..that describes it perfectly M |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I could peek a lift of veil as surely as a fingernail searches for an edge of scab itching curiosity in garner of the leverage of what lies beneath the skin confessional of sin but then? I could bleed to death. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Oh..but Id read ya till I bled out me mothy eyes. I'll bare the brunt of your long buried pain |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
evil grin here I say it backwards all the time and don't have the foggiest idea of who s(he) really is |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
of course this somehow reminded me of being a teenager and being forced to go to confession in school and sitting in that ole hot stinky confessional waiting for the hand of God to come crashing down upon me . . . No thank you - I beat myself up quite enough. *grin* |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
I could bleed to death. so I allow devout deformity- Nothing better than abnormalities. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
i Echo Kaoru.... "Nothing better than abnormalities" *grin* indeed. mxx take bread away from me, if you wish, take air away. but do not take from me your laughter. |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
You are simply amazing. This is the third poem of yours I have read this morn...and now I sit in awe. I knew there was a good reason I was called back to this place this week. Patricia |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
ice, I think serenity's works are always works in progress - like a good carpenter, she goes back in to polish things so danged smooth...that she slips right into your soul. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
I like the way you talk -- no varnish allowed. I'm going to be reading much more of you from now on.... or from two-weeks-from-now on, since I'm going to be away from all computers, slouching on a beach in Maui..... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
whimpering...Maui? sigh (Bring back some Wowee. )thanks for reading, I'm going to go glare back at the sun.  This is decidedly not witch weather. |
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BeWitched Junior Member
since 2005-07-06
Posts 31 |
Wow! |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Yes it is thoughs imperfections that make us beautiful and hose perfections that drive us to madness -Juju Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic |
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