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Of Adore
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Of Adore |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Of Adore You, you are teasing with me, like you did, before those stories I heard? Are stories I store… it was said, as if a chore, She was this, and all that much more… SHE, it was said with some shaking of heads… wore Black…and scared me… almost out of breath… some tried to say, You scared me to death… and it was, in that web of sublime in that fine moment in that moment of time when you must have thought, and you truly thought… BREATHE! and instilled in me a life of BELIEVE…. and it was this, and all so much more…. that kept you within this… and that time of adore. "There's a reason they call God The Creator - he sides with talent." Julia Cameron |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
"adore, more, believe, breathe" Some very special and important words in this poem, sissie. And, as you are, beautiful!  |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
I love the loose rhyme scheme you used in this piece and the presention...not to mention the message  Lovely, lovely work Ruth |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Oh Oh, YAY! perfect rhyme, perfect flow.... lovin it Sunshinygirl...all of it and you. a  Mxx take bread away from me, if you wish, take air away. but do not take from me your laughter. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
inhaling before I sigh...  (I'd hyperventilate if I didn't) love the lady love  |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Very nice, Karilea. To be able to believe, I think, is a good thing. |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
I read this a few times because (as you know) I just ADORE flow and use of rhyme. But too, I believe there is much more in these words. Patricia |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
It is marvelous to read of those who inspire you still. Well done. KJ Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
You always were good but since I have been away from this site you have become great. I loved every word, every beat of this. Marilyn. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful...how I admire your talent. Hugs YOU! Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that. |
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