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A Thousand Whispers
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A Thousand Whispers |
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evomx5 Member
since 2005-07-11
Posts 52Atlanta, GA |
A thousand whispers wrap around me They’re all your voice but it just can’t be You left me here so long ago I listen closely, now I know It’s all the times you said, “I love you” Words I thought were really true They came so freely from your lips But cost me dearly, and made me slip To the edge of despair as you walked away A state I’m in to this very day I try to ignore them, they won’t get out They turn from a whisper into a shout Taunting me, haunting me, driving me mad They make me regret the love that we had But I don’t regret it, it’s part of my life Glorious days when you were my wife So I live with your voice inside of my head Wishing most days that I was dead But each time I try to put down the pain I hear you whisper “I love you” again. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
*gosh* this one goes right to the heart.... excellent...  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"So I live with your voice inside of my head Wishing most days that I was dead But each time I try to put down the pain I hear you whisper “I love you” again." A beautifully penned bittersweet write. Sending heart hugs your way, Nancy Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that. |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Sigh.. Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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