Open Poetry #36 |
Grace of Small Moments |
Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Sometimes it's your fingers. Or the tilt of your head when thoughts strike a peculiar chord. There is a grace to small motions. As if a stillness waits beneath our gestures. Sometimes...my fingers follow in your lines. And fall into this stillness. Until another wave of graceful motions. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I think, what I like most about your poetry are when the fluid moments take over and words are just a quiet whisper... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
touching thank you |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Lovely...this softly flows down the page.. Love it!! Hugs~Nancy ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Ericc you have the amazing ability to make people feel your words..... I keep a fragrance bottle my |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
"There is a grace to small motions. As if a stillness waits beneath our gestures." Wonderfully said, Eric, and too there is grace in the stillness - oh, and most definitely in your poetry. |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
mmmmm - nicely done - |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
Sounds almost like questions and answers in movement Bodger |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Thinking of those small graceful motions that mean so much... yes. *S* This is so very lovely!!! |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
oh....very nice. I felt the fingers trace and the following eye. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Eric, you write with much grace and great patience....and love the way you stand back and see things...study moments is what you do...an attribute difficult to find...your awareness blesses you.... Enjoyed |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
soft and lovely |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Eric It is the "Grace of Small Moments" that brings your poetry to life...you capture them with your own grace. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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