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Open Poetry #36

gratitude to a student

kaile

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since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

0 posted 2005-07-22 08:10 AM

crushed paper somersaulted,
erupting the classroom
girls chased guys,
refusing to be bullied

I ran haphazard,
my eight arms
quietening them
in vain

you later thanked me
for a lesson I hardly executed,
sprinkling warmth
on my famine for hope

SEA

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since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2005-07-22 10:07 AM

I enjoyed this

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2005-07-22 05:49 PM

LOL, you indeed need eight arms in that setting! LOL
enjoyable read
whimsical fun

now, get ready to catch
the next paper spitwad

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

3 posted 2005-08-21 10:58 AM

enjoyed kaile...very much

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