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you are forever.... |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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 ~Timeless you are forever love~ my fingertips hold in memory the feel of you and my lips remain devoted to your kiss my soul remembers a thousand lifetimes spent in your eyes and with each and every breath my heart wishes only to feel your arms around me again ~SEA~ |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 OMGbut this brings on another round of heartache but? thank you, for this |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
SEA: I know this feeling... It's like "soul-yearning"... However hard, I suppose it's better to know it than not... -MVS You CAN make a difference, but first you should learn how: http://educate-yourself.org/intro.shtml |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Sue.. You write these so well. Hugs~Nancy Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
NIce...James |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
thank you all very much!!  |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
You are sure a romantic you are, and good for us too! ~* Carpe' Diem *~ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
enjoyed this companionship pose.. proper spooning looks good on you |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah, Susan... you need to go back to some of your original poems, light them up like you do now, and repost... t'would be a pleasure to see the earlier you, revived! This? Is such a good show of growth in your writing!  |
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evomx5 Member
since 2005-07-11
Posts 52Atlanta, GA |
This is beautiful. Memories of love can haunt us forever. Wonderful piece...Mike :-) |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
this was beautiful...reminded me of sitting on the beach alone, looking way out to the horizon, wondering if he to, felt that...I believe he does...don't you? We always will remember that great love...and be better for it.... Hugs to you, wonderfully done |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ 'my soul remembers a thousand lifetimes spent in your eyes' listen .... did you hear it ? .... that was Marge, here in Florida, *sighing*~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Exquisitely expressed Susan. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Now I remember why I loved this place so...This is beautiful. Patricia |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
**Sigh**  lovely you.... In your light I learn how to love |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
You can sure write some beautiful poems. I have always enjoyed reading what you write. |
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SoundWaves Member
since 2005-06-22
Posts 113Center Stage |
Beautiful Susan! I love reading this kind of write. The spotlight can only get brighter. |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
this aches with love...enjoyed  If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
this made me smile, Susan I know that feeling and miss it. |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
thank you all so much for your great replies |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Sigh...just, sighhhh. mxx take bread away from me, if you wish, take air away. but do not take from me your laughter. |
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yv Senior Member
since 2003-05-30
Posts 574 |
Oh...wow. How close to home that one hits. Beautiful! Yv-Goddess of Her Domain. Symbol of Truth Passion Pain. Let Her Smile Rain on the Hearts of the Innocent. |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
I think you know me.....lol. Hit close to home here as well. Marilyn. |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
thank you ladies, for the understanding and the knowing |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautifully bittersweet, dearest friend, I still yearn to be touched by loves first kiss, but I can understand how these memories and feelings can beautifully haunt so many golden hearts and my heart goes out to them all! (angel friendship hugs) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other" |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
beautiful soul eternal love for ones twin with heart and spirit soul's love becomes as one part of our creator where life begun~ My spirit will rise |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
miss ... reading you... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Revisit...James |
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StevenS Senior Member
since 2005-09-21
Posts 945L. A. (Lower Alabama) |
Most exquisitely beautiful! |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
SEA...A memory like you write of in this poem deserves too be kept in a special place. Thanks for sharing your heart with us...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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Sharksbean Member
since 2005-09-25
Posts 368jax |
that was breathtakingly beautiful |
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