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night plea
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night plea |
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James_A_Fraser Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972Out Making Anticlines |
stay oh stay this time don’t let the moment fade again please promise me you’re here that I’m not waking in the dark again consumed within the essence of your kiss again desperately holding this same stray pillow again among these wide cold empty sheets again lost in fragments of a dream again alone |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is incredibly beautiful... and painfully poignant. Yes... when dreams have you right where you want to be/should be and reality intrudes... it leaves a hollowness I didn't think could be verbalized... But you did. *S* |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
suthern took the words 'write' out of my pen!!!  EA |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Jamie "lost in fragments of a dream again alone" |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
James, Love your night plea! I just hate it when I wake up from a good dream, one that I wish could go on! Another one for the collection I'm afraid! miscellanea |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Expressed so well... A touching poem, James. Patricia |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent write James...much enjoyed. Hugs~Nancy Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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