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Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

0 posted 2005-07-20 06:40 PM

Cute Intruder
By: Noah Eaton
7/18/05

Down to the sound of a heartbeat,
sleeping in a starfish position,
feathered by the molasses moonlight,
all is quiet on my heart’s radius!
Oh wait, ooohhhhh, who’s this,
walkin’ into my life at seven o’clock,
this youngblood lover undercover,
effortlessly breaking my heart’s lock.

All along the corridors of my heart,
I hear faint echoes of her skipped heartbeats,
begin to hear all the things she dreams about,
pieces of secrets that she keeps,
before I know it she’s got me cornered,
there’s no doubling back from her,
posing with her hands on her hips,
ooooohhh, she’s got me covered.

She’s my cute intruder,
she’s so positively luscious,
she’s my cute intruder,
she’s my twinkle-toed bubblegumshoe,
she’s my cute intruder,
she’s so positively luscious,
she’s my cute intruder,
she’s my sub-rosa inamorata.

When I hold her in my arms,
annointed together in the hot moonlight,
slow-dancing in the sheets,
lips swinging eager throughout the restless night,
making sweet love until we fall asleep,
where she can hear me talking in my sleep,
she’s now my slick-chick witness,
confirming how much I want, need, love her everything.

She tells me she works for FROU-FROU,
(Flirtatious Ravishing Overwhelming Unavoidable Female Runafters Operating Undercover)
always dressed in her hot pink mini-skirt,
with her strawberry-kissed brown hair always worn down,
striding in her Hello Kitty slippers,
she tells me some are equipped with Hyannis Satchel 7755’s,
complete with Undertoners and Humectacators,
we both know their heartthrobing abilities require no technology,
cuz they’re all naturally born smooth communicators!

She’s my cute intruder,
she’s so positively luscious,
she’s my cute intruder,
she’s my twinkle-toed bubblegumshoe,
she’s my cute intruder,
she’s so positively luscious,
she’s my cute intruder,
she’s my sub-rosa inamorata.

(Ha ha ha,
nobody knows it,
but you’ve got a secret smile,
and you use it only for me,
what’d you say we seal this confidentiality,
with a kiss,
sugar lips,
whooooo!")

Both hands on the wheel, sweet thang,
I’m a very adventurous passenger,
I hope you don’t mind my intrusion,
I’d like to search your home sweet headquarters,
before I know it she got me cornered,
there’s no doubling back from her,
posing with her hands on her hips,
ooooohhh, she’s got me covered.

She’s my cute intruder,
she’s so positively luscious,
she’s my cute intruder,
she’s my twinkle-toed bubblegumshoe,
she’s my cute intruder,
she’s so positively luscious,
she’s my cute intruder,
she’s my sub-rosa inamorata.

Cute Intruder!
(Cute Intruder!)
Cute Intruder!
(So positively luscious!)
Cute Intruder!
(Cute Intruder!)
Cute Intruder!
(She’s so positively luscious!)

"If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other"

Mother Teresa

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2005-07-20 06:55 PM

"(Ha ha ha,
nobody knows it,
but you’ve got a secret smile,
and you use it only for me,
what’d you say we seal this confidentiality,
with a kiss,
sugar lips,
whooooo!")"

OMG Noah

this is too cute!! You make me smile!

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

2 posted 2005-07-20 07:21 PM

Hi Noah, my friend!!! It is so good to see you!!
I've missed you so much. And, these are just the cutest
song lyrics you've written here. I would love to hear
the music. Do you have it written too?
Thanks for sharing this with us.
Hugs,

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2005-07-20 11:09 PM

Noah, your poem is deliciously delightful!

These lines were especially sweet ~

"(Ha ha ha,
nobody knows it,
but you’ve got a secret smile,
and you use it only for me,
what’d you say we seal this confidentiality,
with a kiss,
sugar lips,
whooooo!")"

~ Gosh, she better hurry up and find you! She's missin' out on a whole lotta lovin' in the meantime!