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voice of watersong
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voice of watersong |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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when you were a waterfall you wondered of my eyes and my mouth and would I kneel to drink or stand as a man tree and savor your bathing when you were a river's depths you wondered of my hands and my arms and would I pull through you with oaring conviction or drift subtle in your currents when you were the lake at dawn you wondered of my mind and my poetry and would I dream of your horizon or submerge my mentations and penspeak your most hidden to voice for you a watersong ________________ dark |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
this reminds me of a thought...oft I've pondered....if I were drowning, would he jump in and save me...I've only known men who couldn't...and now, I want one that would... smiles...and thank you for this mornings sunrise....  |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
i feel you bubbling within me about to erupt from my spring |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
lee J, heck yes I would jump in..maybe even drain the lake...thanks lady friend ______________ ms inky, hmmmmmmm such a sticky pleasure to have your eyes on my offering, thanks babe |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
this is so completely beautiful!  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sea..thank you for the splash of your eye touch here |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Am out of country, but happen to be near a computer - so I thought I'd get a little DS fix - much enjoyed hugs - S |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
What a beautiful watersong this is, DS! The fluidity of your imagery refreshes both body and spirit. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms susan..no fair,,get back here mrs...you are missed by the trees..thanks lady friend ______________ ms midnite, you bless me with your touch here, thank you |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
when you were a river's depths you wondered of my hands and my arms and would I pull through you with oaring conviction or drift subtle in your currents when you were the lake at dawn you wondered of my mind and my poetry and would I dream of your horizon or submerge my mentations and penspeak your most hidden to voice for you a watersong ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ your penspeak is as lovely as the cadence of the waves... any woman would be lucky (and grateful) to have ner name written in the sand in this way. Thank you clarity ... thank you frailty |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
And when she was an ocean? What song, then?  loving this one... |
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BeWitched Junior Member
since 2005-07-06
Posts 31 |
What a beautiful voice you have |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
I hear a miss you song... |
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