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Another Day
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Another Day |
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evomx5 Member
since 2005-07-11
Posts 52Atlanta, GA |
I woke this morning by the light of the sun Another lonely day has just begun Seconds to minutes, minutes to hours The day passes by like a cloud full of showers I roam the house but all I can see Are stark reminders of you and me And I promise myself to get rid of them all But if I did I’m afraid I would fall Into a pit so deep, a hole so wide I could never climb out without you by my side So I cling to them and stain them with tears Like I’ve done every day for the past few years I visit the places where we liked to go In hopes that I’d see you but you never show So I come back home feeling worse than before The pain and loneliness just gets more I miss you so much, but I think even more I miss who I was and I miss how we wore A blanket of love wrapped tightly around Two hearts together and forever bound I don’t understand it and I never will Why you left me alone to try and fill An empty life without even a chance For any other kind of love or romance So I curse each new day for I know what it brings Emptiness, heartache and all of the things That you left me with, without even a care Life without you is so hard to bear. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
enjoyed this entire poem, but this, this was my favorite I miss you so much, but I think even more I miss who I was and I miss how we wore A blanket of love wrapped tightly around Two hearts together and forever bound as it should be. beautiful writing |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
A touchingly sad writing.  "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
sentimental...and so sad..but very well done... I enjoy reading you |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Another wonderful story in rhyme of fine (snitching it  for the old folks - thank you.) |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I don't think I've had the pleasure of reading you before. I love the way you rhyme. This is my kind of poetry. And I love the feelings you put into the poem. Thanks for sharing with us. Hugs,  |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
a beautifully written heartache is still...a heartache hoping time helps heal  |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
I don’t understand it and I never will Why you left me alone to try and fill An empty life without even a chance For any other kind of love or romance She left you? is she crazy? her loss... If your heart is as soft as your poetry... Even if you know it or not, it is shinning now, a beacon~love will see it glowing, finding its way to help you heal~ Love attracts love~ ~ARH "Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take - but by the moments that take our breath away." |
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