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tatalinia Member
since 2005-12-17
Posts 137CA, US 
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I have come to this earth to fulfill something of greatness when it is finished so shall I for my time is short but my words will go on Im not afraid of death or whatever I must face for the pain I have endured from this life has consumed my life and built me strong nothing will take me down till my time is done I speak in riddles i speak with ryhme I do not need shine or wealth just a pen and some paper for my health |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"I do not need shine or wealth just a pen and some paper for my health" I'm sure lots here will agree with you on that!  Welcome to Pip!  |
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Hockeychick19 Member
since 2002-10-29
Posts 430Massachusetts, USA |
Tatalinia~ I can really relate to this. Welcome to the PipTalk family. *~Kelly~* |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
First, what a beautiful user name! quote: Amen! Check your email for a very special greeting! Welcome to Passions! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Welcome to Passions !! Much enjoyed your first post Have fun here !!! hugs, Chris |
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tatalinia Member
since 2005-12-17
Posts 137CA, US |
hey thank you guys for replying to my poem. i look forward to enjoying reading some of yours as well. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Althia~ So, your real name IS as pretty as your user ID !!! Lovely entrance into our family circle of poetic friends~ Enjoy your stay~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*No matter what I search for ... |
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Jeep Monkey Member
since 2005-12-18
Posts 96Chaos |
Line 10 "Built me strong" Strong writing. I liked this one much. |
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poe Member
since 2004-09-06
Posts 180Heading to China |
Excellent write. You can look at it and take it, in many a form. Yet it resinates with the fact a poets words are a poets life. Continue the good work poe Tomorrow comes for those who fear it. Today never ends for those who live it. |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
Enjoyed the read. Welcome to Passions :-) |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
nice entry into the blue. that's the attitude, only way to survive when things do their best to keep you down |
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Edward Grim Senior Member
since 2005-12-18
Posts 1154Greenville, South Carolina |
That is a great poem. "I do not need shine or wealth just a pen and some paper for my health", It's like you read my thoughts. It reminds me of one of my poems, I'll post it soon. Nice write! Keep "maintaining your health"! lol - Ed Grim |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS! Excellent first post. I look forward to reading more of your work. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Let peace begin with me... |
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tatalinia Member
since 2005-12-17
Posts 137CA, US |
thanks for all the responses, i look forward to puting some more of my stuff up as well as reading yours. ALTHIA |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
I hope we must not take your time limit too literally. Enjoyed your poem. - Owl |
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