Open Poetry #36 |
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Within My Heart You Will Live On |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia ![]() |
![]() Picture by Josephine Wall * * * A dear friend of mine passed away just before Christmas and I wrote this 3 days after her funeral * * * I am missing you already And I feel empty deep inside You were a big part of my life Someone in whom I could confide What will I do now On Fridays around one? As I stop and think about you My heart slowly comes undone You wouldn't want to see me cry As I sit here in my sorrow You would want me to be happy Looking forward to tomorrow I never will forget you And in time, I will move on But now is not the time As I struggle to be strong I spend time here in my garden As thoughts of you come to mind I remember you sense of humour And you face, so warm and kind I am lost within my thoughts As I stop and reminisce Within my heart you will live on But it's your presence that I'll miss I am in motion |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
This is wonderful, honest and true as only Australian's can do. Excellent job putting your sorrow into words. Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
"Within my heart you will live on But it's your presence that I'll miss." Sue I'm sorry for you loss. Your words are a beautiful heartfelt tribute to a very special friend. believe in what your heart feels... |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Suetang, I am so sorry to hear of your loss. This is such a loving tribute to your friend. ![]() |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...no one likes to lose someone they care for...James |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
This was beautiful Sue, sorry about your loss, I too had two friends die last year. Your words rang true to feelings inside, thanks for sharing this and your heart. Be well my friend and take care. Sincerely Rick |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
As we age, we face this, and the truth of our own "soon" more and more often. But I sense your friend is holding you close... with much warmth, and the love you've always known. ![]() |
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Fee Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 381Melbourne, Australia |
Sue, Sorry for your loss, I know that you feel this closer to home. Thinking of you. It was so nice to come back here and find you still writing. Big Hugs, Fee |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Suetang, this is beautiful, as always. I am so sorry for the loss of your friend. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Thank you all for your kindness and sincerity. I have only just started writing again and am looking forward, as I know that is what my friend would have wanted. Take care........Sue I am in motion |
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