Open Poetry #36 |
January |
Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
Through snow Beneath an arabesque of branches— On a frozen stream A young boy is hunting |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
A tantalizing taste here, John. I can't help but wish for more of it. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Could be an image of eons ago. Love the "arabesque of branches" vision. Love, Margherita |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
Margherita, Well . . . maybe not “eons” Thanks for reading John |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
It's just lovely John. |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
can be anything. I would say that it was the image of father. |
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