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DanniArtist
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since 2005-12-08
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0 posted 2006-01-06 06:39 PM


The Formula  
  
Carbon monoxide, suffocates my blue lined thoughts
Chemistry, blurry future in tiny membranes  
I go, I fall, I sleep
Nurse me dear love, I need your portrayed lip

Ginger me my red haired girl,  
I forgot your flatters and good words
An outcome of a secret formula you concoct
Lab results you fabricated, it’s getting hot

Oxygen, again I breathe without your permission
Life, I can’t fix faults like god, I’m sure no one can
I stay, I run away, my nose makes a beep
Refresh my memory, the one I might keep

Linger, my eagle eyed girl,
I remember your flatters and good words
An outcome of weird combination
Yet we haven’t felt a real sensation  

I guess we can’t react together
A weak formula doesn’t last forever
Laws of physics won’t change my feelings for you
Scientists arise and fall because of you

If adenine and thymine build a genetic code
Why can’t we generate a one of our own
If histamine reacts to an allergy
I want you to be my assuring honey bee

Please, stay with me, I’ll be the conductor
Let’s make chemical love, without the scientific factor  



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Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
1 posted 2006-01-06 07:37 PM


I don't know about the chemistry in this it sounds more like chemical warfare than love, but I understand that love is sometimes like that. Good job with the write, it was explosive!

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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