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Open Poetry #36

Inside the Mind of Others.......

marcel
Senior Member

since 2003-03-02

Posts 660
az, usa

0 posted 2006-01-06 01:58 AM

Inside The Mind of Others…

Everyday is clay in the hands of the word player
Visions as seen from the eyes of chosen souls
When unhappiness strolls within waking fears…
What other reason bids a pen to strike forth timidly
All to confide in one’s humility?
How ironic this passion we bleed onto parchment---
It soaks deeply into sleeping hearts,
Awakening that which is ancient and void of tears…
To share such sacred pain,
We hold so dear for purpose and breath,
Is in itself an unending therapy ladder for others;
If only we could construct invisible rungs,
To quietly descend down this ladder of infinite possibilities,
Then we writers and self-proclaimed philosophers,
Will all have the courage to release our grasp of understanding---
Of understanding the misunderstanding of others,
And together holding hands as one,
We will fall slowly through our combined thoughts,
Landing softly on porous heads,
Laughing as we bleed slowly into dreams and nothingness,
Sinking into the depths of a depressing solitude,
Never hearing those silent snickers,
Of others who secretly wish to be us…..

Marcel

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2006-01-06 10:05 AM

I think you did a wonderful job with this one, Marcel!

Can't decide which lines to quote ... they all are quite special.

Love,
Margherita

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

2 posted 2006-01-06 10:20 AM

Sinking into the depths of a depressing solitude,
Never hearing those silent snickers,
Of others who secretly wish to be us…..

I cannot lie, I loved this as much as my solitude...amazing write....

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2006-01-06 10:40 AM

Marcel~

'Everyday is clay in the hands of the word player'

Indeed ... and you shape them so well~
Word and thought artist you are~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

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