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gemjop
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0 posted 2006-01-05 09:39 PM



Lucid
on the doorstep

I knew
with the sky


and as my eyes searched it

I did not.

The spiders
theives of wings
had trailed cobwebs
over my eyes

like a silent steal
of doubt

I was without

and

minds eye held me
in unearthly shades
of skies

that do not exist

upon the plane of sight
and nod
of science.


And yet
there I was,

gorged
and alone

divine

knowing

everything

as if
I were dead,

just returning.


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Aenimal
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1 posted 2006-01-06 12:14 PM


And yet
there I was,

gorged
and alone

divine
ye shan't ever be alone, and divine, you always were and will be..

aujussy wolf
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2 posted 2006-01-06 02:30 AM


i need to read this one a few times again , it has a haunt to it that is interesting
another cool writing gems
~J

Susan Caldwell
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3 posted 2006-01-06 08:27 AM


"knowing

everything

as if
I were dead,

just returning"


Ohhhhhhh love that!!!


"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

littlewing
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4 posted 2006-01-06 08:46 AM


a rebirth . . . beautiful.


gemjop
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5 posted 2006-01-06 12:14 PM


Thanks you lot. The best dream i have ever, and will probably ever have.

I wish i could write it how it felt, but i could never do it justice.



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