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ahiru
New Member

since 2006-01-05

Posts 7

0 posted 2006-01-05 12:46 PM

clean,
and classic,
and modern,
and chic,
not boring
epitome of confidence
a bold statement.
Nothing compares,
to stark,
pure,
clean
white.
It has no common trait,
with any other colour.
Lamenting colours essence
A pouring barrel,
laughing at the coloured doors.
The white walls stare
a secret love for
the clear
reflective mirrors,
Transparency,
The only thing to out beautify
the clean face,
of white.
Their secrets
lies,
they lie.

Eliyah_becomes
New Member

since 2006-01-02

Posts 6

1 posted 2006-01-05 12:54 PM

your poem creates a great mistique, hidden within the lines that brings a beauty to the common faced words

Skyfire

Member Elite

since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

2 posted 2006-01-05 02:47 AM

Welcome to PiP!

Fantastic first poem, I love the way you put your words together in this. Hope to see more from you!

and then He created the horse...

tracie66
Member Elite

since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

3 posted 2006-01-05 05:10 AM

welcome!
fantastic first post, i enjoyed this very much and can't wait to see more from you

~hugs~

Tracie

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe

whiskey

Senior Member

since 1999-12-28

Posts 1278
Australia

4 posted 2006-01-05 06:16 AM

interesting first post created mystery but also was very well put together. I will look forward to post number two.

Julie

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

5 posted 2006-01-05 09:33 AM

I adore this, Welcome to PIP!

(especially since I have just started painting, I see the undertones here, as well.

Beautiful writing.

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

6 posted 2006-01-05 10:02 AM

Love your first post!!

Please check your email for a special greeting!

Susan

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

7 posted 2006-01-05 11:05 AM

WELCOME TO PASSIONS!
I very much enjoyed your first post.
Looking forward to reading more of your work.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

8 posted 2006-01-05 11:17 AM

Ahiru~

A hearty WELCOME to PiP !!!

I greatly enjoyed the pour of white thoughts down the pages of blue~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

Email - [email protected]

aujussy wolf

Senior Member

since 2003-08-09

Posts 1215
Michigan

9 posted 2006-01-06 02:35 AM

It has no common trait,
with any other colour.
Lamenting colours essence
A pouring barrel,
laughing at the coloured doors.

...greatness !!! and good word play
~J

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

10 posted 2006-01-06 07:36 AM

Ahiru...

I will look forward to even more
of your poetry.

Welcome to Passions!

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