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Eliyah_becomes New Member
since 2006-01-02
Posts 6 |
silent reverance whispers, softly caressing, blowing soft kisses lightly in my ear donned in nothing but love stripped raw, naked, shaking drawn to you with arms wide open stretched high as mist engulfs us the expanse before us stretches wide,winding waters, glitter back treetips sit stark at attention pointing to your majesty flowing with your living touch yet little, details, small only you know the complexity of the lichen, that mushroom touch me streams everything around bantered and broken sick and exhausted the world cries out for help slipping, loosing ground it claws at the slope the rocky outcrop your might draws it back trembling, raw naked stripped of sanity broken to love forever used yet you repair it piece by piece |
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ahiru New Member
since 2006-01-05
Posts 7 |
bravo, very well written! |
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loved_and_redeemed Junior Member
since 2006-01-03
Posts 22BC, Canada |
"silent reverance whispers, softly caressing, blowing soft kisses lightly in my ear donned in nothing but love" Beautiful. What was your inspiration for this poem? Is seems like it is a spiritual poem, but I'm not sure. |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
I enjoyed this, it's form and content... very nice....  _______ __ice ><> |
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Eliyah_becomes New Member
since 2006-01-02
Posts 6 |
thanks guys. love and redeemed this is definetly a spiritual poem i wrote when i was sitting atop a mountain looking out over a magical view of the nature that was obstructed partially by man kinds aggressive expansion. thanks |
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