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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Round and Round Round and round the whirlpool goes Each day it’s closer to my nose I bob about the currents flair I know it’s useless but I dare I splash the sufferance of a seem Dream the substance of a dream Twist and twirl infinity Declare it all insanity Reality is but a cane To tap the darkness of insane Walk a path of want to be Forever sail a sailless sea Each moment seems a pantomime That dances on the grime of time I cannot stand the words I cough If this world stopped I would get off Round and round the whirlpool goes Each day it’s closer to my nose [This message has been edited by Seymour Tabin (01-04-2006 10:21 AM).] |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ Makes me want to sink into that whirlpool, yes it does~ There's a little Delaney sitting next to me wanting poetry read to her ... I'm sharing you with her ... I told her you are an artist and she wants me to show her some of your paintings~ LOL ... she also said to "hold your nose"~  Can you share some with us ? Email me a painting or two or I'll have to resort to trolling the archives for that photo of when Lizzy came to your home ... there was a painting or two in the background ...~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge & Delaney*~ ~*No matter what I search for ... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Seymour! You paint as well as write??! You truly are very artistic!! I have days where I want to stop the world and get off as well. Know the feeling dear man..I know the feeling. ~Morning hugs, Smiles, and a hot cup of Chai tea, Nancy~ In the midst of winter, |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Morning Sy! I rather injoy the insanity at this point. It's familiar and I know how to handle it.  "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Oooh, Seymour...you're making me dizzy!! Let's just sit and chat a spell. Great write! hugs,Chris Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Reality is but a cane To tap the darkness of insane Walk a path of want to be Forever sail a sail less sea this was so cool forever sail a sail less sea No, no, no, Mr Sy...you are the dream of all dreams...with many channels to yet be explored... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, Some day my love. Nancy, Chai tea would be fine.  Susan, Glad you are enjoying the whirlpool. LOL Chris, By all means lets chat. LeeJ, I hope you are right. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
The fact is I understand this all too well. You just wonder when do you get off, and how right? Better do something crazy each day Sy like I do, it helps the monotony some. Hence, my slogan... Carpe' Diem |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sharon, I knew you would understand. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Does Seymour paint?! Would a cow lick Lot's wife????? Of course he does!!! (and you should see some of his work!)  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
MKikke, I don't laugh much but your comment gave me quite a chuckle. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"Reality is but a cane To tap the darkness of insane" Actually, I quite like the words "you cough," Sy! ....jo |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Oh dear Sy keep on twirling my dear, may your whirlpool never stop as we just love the words you cough....not suggesting there's an elixir for that  ~hugs~  Tracie Love is the life of the soul... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
iliana Always enjoy your replies. tracie66 Appreciate your comment, thank you. |
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