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Obscurity
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since 2003-12-04
Posts 153
In A Melancholic Dream

0 posted 2006-01-02 11:36 PM



Lay awake and here me now...

"Present yourself to your deity
And find discprencies that protect your prophets
Contradictions of your birth right,
Find the star - in the moon you will fall
Blasphemy in its own right,
Rise shall be that of a godless men"

Transparent prophecies shields mankind in the twilight of mystics,
We are blinded in the dust-storm of a conjurers deception,
But vehement ideas spread in the world of mortal dreams,
And in my eyes, the fury of the decieved rise beyond melodies,
Further beyond the ideologies of christ-born cities

Look to blasphemy in the sky,
the ideas that you may call divinity
Prepare to awaken from a dream,
the song will spread upon my reality

Bedazzled by
spirituality

Yet, Hell knows no fury to me
Mankind is a small verse in this epical swan song
My mistress, the mystery
She sings these lyrics through the dusk and dawn
Let the skies paint the words to this song upon our reality

© Copyright 2006 Brett Gailey - All Rights Reserved
littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
1 posted 2006-01-02 11:39 PM


I think this is the script to an odd rendition, but a very good one, of the Crucifixion and Nativity I watched the other night.

Nicely done.

Nice lines:

My mistress, the mystery
She sings these lyrics through the dusk and dawn



Aenimal
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350
the ass-end of space
2 posted 2006-01-03 01:15 PM


few will admit the descrepancies, fewer still their blindness. absolutely fantastic write, sadly bruied in the flood(no pun intended) that is open.
Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
3 posted 2006-01-03 02:28 PM


Mystery is our reality, some rare times we see and know the truth, like lightnings in the darkness in which we move ...

Still, we are on the Path towards enlightenment, confused, but determined to find the answers.

Thank you for sharing your vision.

Captivating cadence.

Love,
Margherita

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