navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #36 » Mistic
Open Poetry #36
Post A Reply Post New Topic Mistic Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
shades of paul
Member
since 2005-12-14
Posts 370
In Reality

0 posted 2006-01-02 06:51 PM



She was a premonition, in abstract, but yet focused.
A surreal dream, but yet incarnate.
A brilliant conceptual flash of conciousness, in realm of my mind.
Beyond all human comprehension, only to myself.
Reality ? Dream ? Reality ? Dream ?
Hello she said ,
My name is Mistic.

paul



shades of peace,love,and happiness to you

© Copyright 2006 shades of paul - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
1 posted 2006-01-02 07:11 PM


Ah, and she is...
I love this!!!
Hugs~Nancy

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

Magnus
Deputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Laureate
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA
2 posted 2006-01-02 07:17 PM


Enjoyed the ride...reminds me a little of
some of my poetry where I have discovered
the resident "10".....and the hunt begins!

shades of paul
Member
since 2005-12-14
Posts 370
In Reality
3 posted 2006-01-02 08:23 PM


Thank you for your nice comments...paul

shades of peace,love,and happiness to you

Obscurity
Member
since 2003-12-04
Posts 153
In A Melancholic Dream
4 posted 2006-01-02 10:53 PM


Oh that is rather pretty. I enjoyed that very much so.
Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #36 » Mistic

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary