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Sweet Cherry Bitters
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Sweet Cherry Bitters |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York 
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Maya, immaculate . . . Come, beneath canopy erect with buds of ivory Complete profound transcendence has left me quite attentive to an unbridled awakening from a deep, ontological sleep. Fell with axe, yeilded Consummate hearth Relinquish this euphoric weight The grove of thy birth |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
... mmm hmmmm ...  ... yep ...  |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
I know you know what I'm talkin' bout, Lady *grin* Maya Cherry Folklore Bitters Black Knot Cherry Blossoms Cherry Wood (I have a knot thing goin' on . . .) |
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coyote Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 1077 |
A knot... in cherry wood.... is the most beautiful..... and hardest part. Where once a limb extended... much the same as the civilizations of the ancient ones. Billy 8) "Only the dead, have seen the end of war." |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
im fascinated by the conversation here as i believe the buddha himself would be, and i do prefer mine, chocolate covered, hold the pits  |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Thanks Billy and Michele, I love it - you guys saw into it exactly what I meant to convey and in two different viewpoints, very cool. Thanks guys . . . |
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Dominique-Simone Senior Member
since 2005-11-12
Posts 643 |
This is very compelling, makes you want to get more...lovely images as well..Great work. |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
~WOW~ |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Definitely a forceful poem. "with buds of ivory" Nicely done. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
This is a brilliant write, littlewing! Saving it, k? |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Them's some fine knots, little one... awaiting the rest of the grove... and don't forget aspen   |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Thank you everyone . . . I put links there because sometimes I guess I am misunderstood but don't want to sway a perception of what I write, that would be wrong and it makes me very happy to see that each of you see your own knots in these. Which is what I would want. Thank you. Now Kari, you got me on another write there. *grin* Thanks guys, so very much. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
seriously suzie, what is it with the knot thing these days? im in a stupor (more then usual) here |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
LOL Michele I am writing a series of knots . . . all kinds of knots, I have no idea where it came from but trying to put knots in things I write. somebody liked a couple of my knots, they want to see more . . . *grin* |
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Obscurity Member
since 2003-12-04
Posts 153In A Melancholic Dream |
I can understand and applaud this piece of work, but for some reason it reminds me so much of a book I read awhile ago entitled 'The Celestine Prophecy', very nice. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
oh my a handful of finely knotted thoughts methinks the oaks would love the feel of your quill |
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