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Open Poetry #36

A World Without

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

0 posted 2005-12-31 05:48 PM

in a world without earth
   how would water hold
   air be released,
   young mind learn to mold

no grounding,
   taking root

winds sounding,
   always mute

in a world without earth
   how could we be whole
   be resurrected ...
   have young hearts find soul

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2005-12-31 06:02 PM

I cannot even visualize
such a place

HELLO there, Craig!
Happy New Year's wishes to you.

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

2 posted 2005-12-31 08:45 PM

thank you KC ....

    I know a few souls that have been
     "spirited" as of late ....

    they maybe in for a rough time when
     they land!

          to them and all those feeling a little
            to free ....

                where would we be in a world without

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

3 posted 2006-01-09 05:22 PM

where would we be? good to read you....this leaves a lot to ponder....luv you...

Musicmaker1969

Senior Member

since 2000-06-25

Posts 589
Peterborough, Ontario Canada

4 posted 2006-01-09 11:57 PM

Very good points in your poem. But I think that the answer actually lies beyond the earth, in Heaven's eyes. it is there that we find love, faith, loyalty and so much more that we are longing for. But as for your poem, I was very moved. Well done.
Sheri Adams

Jesus lives in my heart! He can in yours too!!!
Sheri Liegh Adams
sheriliegh@sympatico.ca

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