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A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
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Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2005-12-30 05:54 AM



The music plays,
my thoughts dance,
to a different time,
when you and I shared,
conversations and laughter,

I remember the joy of seeing,
what a new day held in store
for me,

each day was even better
than before,
one memory plays strongly
in my mind, was the time,
loves definition came alive,

Reading the card with music
and words, tears flowed down
my cheeks, consumed with joy,

"Come Away With me"
Oh , how I wished I could,
run away with you in our world,

Life moves so quickly,
its gone before we know it,
what will be left to show,
what we have lived and died
for?

LOVE? I want to live knowing,
I am loved, and die knowing,
you loved me, unconditionally,

Love made my chest hurt,
love made me cry, with joy,
love is and will be by my side
when I die,

You brought love to me,
flowers everyday, hand picked,
and i love you for knowing,
how to love me,

I love you for giving love life,
into this weary old heart of mine.
Love like that can never be forgotton,
so that is why,
I remember.

© Copyright 2005 Millette A. (Lester) Addison - All Rights Reserved
Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665

1 posted 2005-12-30 06:25 AM


Not sure about the "weary old heart" bit...if others had such a passionate heart as you, the worlds problems would desolve and melt into the sea of human kindness...the other parts of the poem are just beautiful..thank you..

Goldenrose.

Desire for nothing except desirelessness,hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes, want nothing and you will have everything.avatar Meher Baba.

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart
2 posted 2005-12-30 06:32 AM


It was weary and tired when you had found it, all shattered and worn out, like an old shoe..LOL

~ARh

bgj
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since 2005-11-09
Posts 128
Ga. USA
3 posted 2005-12-31 12:41 PM


Beautiful write. Happy New Year,
bgj

ctowen
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since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT
4 posted 2005-12-31 05:26 PM


a lot to remember .....

   but such heart can only shine its romantic light.

wishing you your happiness in the New Year!
CT

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