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Open Poetry #36

New Year

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2005-12-30 05:17 AM

A page turned
Another chapter closed

The book goes on
In deeds and words

Nearer to an epilogue

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2005-12-30 09:57 AM

OR?

Shouldering her pack
she looks forward
and sighs?

I like your personifications better tho.

I can't do these, because, as you have prolly figured out by now, I can't shaddup.

May you have joy in the coming year, John.

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

2 posted 2005-12-30 10:42 AM

smiling at Karen's comment
You know that I enjoy all of your work John, even if some it requires work from me.

Happy New Year !! Chris

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

3 posted 2005-12-30 11:10 AM

And a happy new year to you.

John

MyEnchanted_Melody
Senior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

4 posted 2005-12-30 12:03 PM

I loved it...
though a bit morose...but powerful and evocative.

I read this just as I was about to post my own poem for the new year.

Happy new year

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

5 posted 2007-05-01 03:13 PM

happy new year to you!!!!
Happy another new year to you!!!

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