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Open Poetry #36

A Haiku

exhale
Senior Member

since 2003-06-13

Posts 646
Alberta,Canada

0 posted 2005-12-28 08:15 PM

The gun is pointed
am I behind the trigger
or, perhaps, are you?

bgj
Member

since 2005-11-09

Posts 128
Ga. USA

1 posted 2005-12-28 11:56 PM

Very strong write. Well said.
bgj

Jeep Monkey
Member

since 2005-12-18

Posts 96
Chaos

2 posted 2005-12-28 11:59 PM

Touche! Snickering Haiku if ever I counted the syllables in one!

I really enjoy reading your work. Witty one you are!

JM

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2005-12-29 12:06 PM

Wow! That was one powerful, pistol-packing, solar-plexus-punching senryu! ~ and it still managed to come across as a cute write! Now that takes talent! lol

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

4 posted 2005-12-29 01:05 AM

nice edge to this

tracie66
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since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

5 posted 2005-12-29 02:53 AM

I enjoy Haiku's and this was no exception, wonderful piece.

~hugs~
Tracie

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe

exhale
Senior Member

since 2003-06-13

Posts 646
Alberta,Canada

6 posted 2005-12-30 05:38 PM

wow thanks everyone, i've got to say, this was one of my better ones

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