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The Fire of Dust
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The Fire of Dust |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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The Fire of Dust Rubbing phantoms of engage A single spark ignites its clime Starts a fire on this stage Within the bellowed winds of time Damn the fires graze of hell Damn the feelings of insane Damn the sulfur and its smell And damn the acids of the pain Glowing in an awesome bright It shades the moon to utter gloom Scorching all within its sight Spilling ashes in the room Shadowing the sun with clouds Sewing webs of dreary dark Placing veils of seven shrouds Setting stone to set the mark Rubbing phantoms frictions key With cinders of the former me |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
There will always be a spark... always.    . |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Sy your creative talent burns brightly. And it sparks all of our imaginations. Well done!!! believe in what your heart feels... |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Sparkling Sy Very nice write my friend....as usual of course. Eric |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine This spark wishes you well.  scorpio Thank you friend and a happy holiday to you. ethome I'm wishing you a good year. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
a darker side of you here, which has me going "hmmm"--it's very much like a new year's eve witch thang I do. I wonder 'bout you sometimes.  I think you know this stuff better'n I do. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Mr. T., I know that whenever you write of the doom and gloom of the moon, you will soon be writing again of golden fun in the sun! You write equally well of both sides, my sweet sonneteering yin/yang!  Who could help but love such a multi-faceted enigma! May 2006 be a year of improved health, happiness and peace of mind! EA |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
If we can't know the dark, we can't know the light but sometimes if would be nice to remain ignorant. Enjoyed the read. Thanks. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
serenity, I wonder about myself, sometimes. LOL Earth Angel You are the nicest Angel I know. In fact the only Angel I know.  You welcome Honeybunch. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Damn the fires graze of hell Damn the feelings of insane Damn the sulfur and its smell And damn the acids of the pain Glowing in an awesome bright It shades the moon to utter gloom Scorching all within its sight Spilling ashes in the room Shadowing the sun with clouds Sewing webs of dreary dark Placing veils of seven shrouds Setting stone to set the mark Rubbing phantoms frictions key With cinders of the former me ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ OH you rock ... YOU ROCK ...YOU ROCK!!!! Could this poem be any cooler??? Rock and ROLL fire and brimstone rhyme divine!! The real sin is in not reading this poem aloud!! You are me pied piper of poetry...cadence of way cool   *ww*  Thru the water...thru the rain |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, I miss you. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
BRAVO!! Ahhh loved this Sy, exceptional write...enjoyed! ~hugs~  Tracie Love is the life of the soul... |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Gosh, I don't know why This felt like a rebirth to me, Sy. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: You are the spark, born anew! Great play of dark and light, dear Seymour! Happy New Year! Love and hugs. Margherita |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Tracie, Thank you enjoyed your reply. littlewing Thank you for the read and comment. Margherita Love and hugs back and a good year to you too. |
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