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Bodger
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since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260
Tolerance for a short time

0 posted 2005-12-23 05:06 PM


Jean said to me your stuff is to heavy, people like it when you write light

I'll write light

And you have a Christmas to remember and New Year that will always fail our expectations

regards

Dave

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She flew like an Eagle in her mind and ran like the devil to catch her mind as her feelings and love flowed

For hours perfection in lights motion and her system she achieved her thoughts about where her thoughts might go

She smiled and complained and in her strength she drew and ran the images and she told them, what they should be

People call her strange, brain not on the job

But job leaves you

Your indeavours, brain and drive dont

And this started light and has become heavy

____________________________________________
Mister

Can I give you my name and address
Why would you do that Son
I want to go to see that exhibition
And I haven't got the money
But if I give you my name and address
I can go

Give me your name and address Son

what do you want to see

I dont know


That's why I want to see

Dave


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Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
1 posted 2005-12-23 05:59 PM


Merry Christmas Dave!

~Let peace begin with me...     

MGROVES
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california
2 posted 2005-12-24 04:02 AM


merry xmas

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

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