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pandonov
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b/w conscience and insolence

0 posted 2005-12-22 09:55 AM


micro lies
running through my watery thoughts…
one experience
chocolate-tasted by the feeling of reality.

is it the monitor
hypnotizing me to
stupidity?  

slowly, vibrating the sound
i’m aware of a line raped to fit.

knocking…    

beat, synchronizing tryouts
laying down chronic imperfection


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with you
1 posted 2005-12-22 09:59 AM


I'm not always sure what you are talking about specifically, but I really like the way you word it...and the way it "fits".
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the ass-end of space
2 posted 2005-12-22 02:07 PM


lot of pseudos out there, pseudo news, pseudo entertainment, pseudo wars..

excellent work petre, always a pleasure reading you

serenity blaze
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3 posted 2005-12-22 03:23 PM


I enjoyed this too.

It evoked the feeling that I was observing myself, watching myself, watching myself...if that makes sense.

It's been awhile since I've read you, and agreeing with Raph--it's always a pleasure.

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Gaia
4 posted 2005-12-22 03:42 PM


Am grinning here in recognition,
knowing much about chronic imperfection.

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