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pandonov Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 478b/w conscience and insolence 
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micro lies running through my watery thoughts… one experience chocolate-tasted by the feeling of reality. is it the monitor hypnotizing me to stupidity? slowly, vibrating the sound i’m aware of a line raped to fit. knocking… beat, synchronizing tryouts laying down chronic imperfection |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I'm not always sure what you are talking about specifically, but I really like the way you word it...and the way it "fits".  |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
lot of pseudos out there, pseudo news, pseudo entertainment, pseudo wars.. excellent work petre, always a pleasure reading you |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I enjoyed this too. It evoked the feeling that I was observing myself, watching myself, watching myself...if that makes sense.  It's been awhile since I've read you, and agreeing with Raph--it's always a pleasure. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Am grinning here in recognition, knowing much about chronic imperfection. |
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