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jinx26
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since 2005-12-12
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Jersey

0 posted 2005-12-21 06:26 PM



Surround me in warmth.
Touch me gentle hands.
Meaningless?
Echoes in my head.
Time?
Ticking slow.
Won't make this go.

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aujussy wolf
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since 2003-08-09
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1 posted 2005-12-21 06:49 PM


like it , short and sweet
you have heart i must say
peace ~wolfie

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
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Michigan, USA
2 posted 2005-12-23 08:48 PM


Much said in a few gentle words.
TD

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
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3 posted 2005-12-26 08:27 PM


bump...
jinx26
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Jersey
4 posted 2005-12-27 01:57 PM


TD....Thank you for the Bump.... Jinx
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