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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2005-12-21 11:16 AM


Phantom Feelings

Phantom feelings, I here confide
Meld into a streams abide
Sweeping brine into my eyes on
The haunting whispers of my sighs

Surrounding me with filigree
And dipping me in fantasy
Touching me with aches of haunt
Those that press my heart with taunt

And I in hallows searching walls
Wrapped in tallow of the calls
Echoing of thorn and rose
Drawing tears that run my nose

These tumbling thoughts that drum and hone
Whose fumbling wear succumb my bone
Rub my mind to pink and raw
That brings eruption from the core

And though illusion stirs the dream
Each night I’m swept into this stream

© Copyright 2005 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2005-12-21 01:12 PM



My kind of poem...
certainly my kind [of] poet...

Yep...

Now I'm happy...and left haunted
by your whispers...





Merry Christmas, SY!


Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2005-12-21 01:14 PM


Sunshine,
Thank you dear and a Merry one to you.

Earth Angel
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3 posted 2005-12-21 01:17 PM


Mr. T., I'm sending you a super duper speed boat with twin Mercs! You'll be able to steer clear of that unpleasant dream stream!

Begone all your phantom feelings! I bid you dreams of sweet each and every night!

Dreaming

Beddy-bye hugs,
EA

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4 posted 2005-12-21 01:23 PM


Oh, Seymour - methinks it is just that old poop, Christmas Past. He loves to rattle his chains and interrupt our sleep. Sometimes the dreams are winterfully wonderful...other times....BRRRRRR.
Just turn over onto your other side and sweet dreams shall return.
Hugs, Chris

Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2005-12-21 05:21 PM


Earth Angel
Thank you dear and a Happy Holiday to you.

Chris,
The best of Holiday to you.

Alwye
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6 posted 2005-12-21 06:25 PM


This spoke to me, Seymour.  Sad and powerful, this is. i enjoyed!

~*Krista Lee Knutson*~

"Creating yourself is a spiritual act." ~ Susan Vreeland

Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 2005-12-21 06:28 PM


Alwye
Thank you and have a Happy Holiday.

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8 posted 2005-12-21 07:14 PM


Excellent write!
Eric

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9 posted 2005-12-21 07:48 PM


Ericc
Thank you and have a Happy holiday.

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