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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2005-12-21 08:03 AM


when you were the ivory tree
with limbs of pale subtlety
and you wore the ribbons of silk
at the branches of your wrists

when I was the wind that bound
with my pleasure for ligature
the naughts of your permission
that were perfect cypher endings

when your eyes were liquefied
when they were the soft thaw
melted from a lover's passion
when they were amber edge baubles

offered to my jeweler's loope
as your treasure of precious stones
and you waited in your patient veils
for the punishment of my sanction

as I was enthralled by your immunity


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SEA
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with you
1 posted 2005-12-21 09:21 AM


"when your eyes were liquefied
when they were the soft thaw
melted from a lover's passion"

*SIGHS*

gooooood morning D!



Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
2 posted 2005-12-21 09:22 AM


Now I know
why the trees
are wearing
their frosting...

from SEA's sigh...




Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

3 posted 2005-12-21 09:25 AM


joining Sea in that sigh....

sigggggggghhhhhhh

lovely M'dark one....

babygirlwlove
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since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180
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4 posted 2005-12-21 10:03 AM


my
oh
my~

~hauntingly beautiful imagery in this...dark..

~Paz
~babygirL

**Intoxicant to the SouL**

Greeneyes
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Member Rara Avis
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In Your Poetic Mind
5 posted 2005-12-21 12:43 PM


hugsss you

Merry Christmas

luv ya



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