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bgj
Member

since 2005-11-09

Posts 128
Ga. USA

0 posted 2005-12-16 12:18 PM

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I think about the way you move
So graceful and divine,
Your hair long waves of amber curls
Deep scented of the vine.

As a ship that spreads it’s sails
Before the morning wind,
My heart unfurls and fills with love
That only you can send.

I think about your dreamy eyes
Warm fires that sooth my soul,
They fill my thoughts and midnight dreams
As you I long to hold.

Your body’s like a storm tossed raft
As you yield to me,
Rising and dipping in the waves
Of passions turbulent seas.

Like a river that never runs dry
Your love endlessly flows,
It fills my heart with joy and bliss
As I travel life’s uncertain road.

        Bobby G. Jarrard

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Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2005-12-16 08:31 PM

what a lovely write!
thank you for sharing this!

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

2 posted 2005-12-17 08:13 PM

So softly said, a picture worth a thousand words.

Happy Holidays,
TD

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2005-12-17 08:24 PM

A beautiful beautiful write.
Hugs~Nancy

~Let peace begin with me...

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

4 posted 2005-12-17 09:03 PM

Nice write, could feel the passion as well
as the picture you painted for us....
Me thinks sailing is in order..

bgj
Member

since 2005-11-09

Posts 128
Ga. USA

5 posted 2005-12-18 11:20 PM

Thanks guys for your comments. Merry Christmas and Peace to all.
bgj

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

6 posted 2005-12-19 09:31 AM

Bobby~

I do like the undulating thoughts that ride the waves of tender emotion in this piece~

'As a ship that spreads it’s sails
Before the morning wind,
My heart unfurls and fills with love
That only you can send.'

I especially like this part~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

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LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

7 posted 2005-12-19 09:47 AM

such a very loverly & sweet message my dear poet...very much enjoyed.

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

8 posted 2005-12-19 12:57 PM

Oh, I like your metaphors. Well done. And Merry Christmas!

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

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