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shades of paul
Member

since 2005-12-14

Posts 370
In Reality

0 posted 2005-12-16 09:14 AM

Moist branches in snow,
tell of holy sprit glow,
Church Whispers in Winter.

Pine needles of blue,
makes my heart pursue true,
Church Whispers in Winter.

Ice covered bell steeple,
calls to all of Gods people,
Church Whispers in Winter.

Stain glass window mist,
conceals spirit heart kiss,
Church Whispers in Winter.

Jesus legend fateful day,
and took all sin away,
Church Whispers in Winter.

Christ's music crescendo,
wants all sheep to know,
of Church Wispers in Winter.

shades of paul,peace,love,and happiness

[This message has been edited by shades of paul (12-18-2005 12:16 AM).]

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

1 posted 2005-12-16 03:30 PM

Well done but likely to be more read in the forum for religious poetry. I did enjoy.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane,
I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

shades of paul
Member

since 2005-12-14

Posts 370
In Reality

2 posted 2005-12-16 10:55 PM

Thanks for the tip , you have entered the new poet always learning zone....paul

shades of paul,peace,love,and happiness

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

3 posted 2005-12-17 08:08 PM

A serene and peaceful feeling befalls the reader. So pleased you graced us here, as many may not journey to seek this comfort.
Contrast is the beauty of within.
TD

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2005-12-17 08:28 PM

A very uplifting write..
much enjoyed the read.
Hugs~Nancy

~Let peace begin with me...

aujussy wolf

Senior Member

since 2003-08-09

Posts 1215
Michigan

5 posted 2005-12-17 11:33 PM

Stain glass window mist,
conceals spirit heart kiss,
Church Whispers in Winter.



   wow need i say more

pure of heart sir
~wolfie

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

6 posted 2005-12-17 11:39 PM

Paul~
I greatly enjoyed seeing this here~

The repetitiveness worked well ...~
Enjoyed the read~

Somehow the word whisper always gets our attention~
(duh ... wasn't that a commercial thing a few years back ?)

Thank you for sharing~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

Email - [email protected]

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2005-12-19 02:56 AM

Enjoyed...James

shades of paul
Member

since 2005-12-14

Posts 370
In Reality

8 posted 2006-01-15 05:55 PM

Thanks for all the comments...paul

shades of peace,love,and happiness to you

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