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D.Lester Young
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Austin, Tx

0 posted 2005-12-16 07:50 AM


This is written as being the husband of the equation, making love to the combined relationship. A relationship I wish to share one day with my own Princess.

The winds have merged us long ago
Upon the romantic breezes of the ages.
Joined to witness each other’s feelings,
Riding the emotions of weathering life,
Together in the unity of one pledge.

Shall we dance upon our memories
Of a marriage vow, growing stronger?
Children born, nurtured to then drift off,
Committing to their path of enlightenment
With another who will witness their love.

Yes sweetheart, be my witness upon heaven,
As I do witness to you my true devotion.
That my tear I shed for you with this rose
Will grow rejuvenated in shared moments.
Special touches bearing witness in this kiss.

So “Let Us Dance” into the evening caressing
Each other’s hearts upon the notes of desires,
Harmonizing two into a single coupled shadow,
Blending into one spiritual union of titillation
Floating upon clouds cuddling fire into passion.

(Season’s Greeting To A Poetic Love Addiction)

Be my witness under the mistletoe of truth
There will never be another Christmas angel
Of such royalty, claiming my absolute loyalty.
Princess of my heart, I will love you till the end,
Witnessing our rejoining upon the hereafter.

Note: Dedicated to my sister Maureen and her devoted husband John that their faith in their marriage is rejoiced upon the heavens, which blesses them now. This is a Christmas gift to them after watching “Let Us Dance” and “Chicago” with them,. It even made this klutz want to dance, as I watched them dance during the movie. Maybe someday I can get the actor’s autographs as a Christmas present. Oh the American dream, may it dance into eternity and be witnessed by true love and devotion.  

D.Lester  12/15/05 ©
Terminated poet, somewhere in America not on company time.
davelyoung1@hotmail.com  poem for the ride upon America’s spirit


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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

1 posted 2005-12-16 08:20 AM


this was loyalty to life my friend, and I marvel at the niceness of it all...

Love to you and yours...

Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2005-12-16 09:27 AM


Dave~

This is a beauty ... and I REALLY liked this thought -

'Be my witness under the mistletoe of truth'

Have a beautiful Christmas of Joy~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

Email -       noles1@totcon.com       

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