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Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

0 posted 2005-12-16 06:02 AM

Cup me
in your hands, turn me
into pure
warmth.

I am simple,
minds and riddles
and I am trying
to say
in words so ordinary..backwards
lifeless and cold...

I struggle
now,
under the weight
of loss.
I
weave
small weapons
into my heart,
I keep
you like
my rare
pinned insect.

You
must like
these honey coated lies,
for you tell them so well...

It's astounding that
you feed
without need,

only

to lessen me.

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2005-12-16 06:55 AM

You shouldn't let anyone "lessen you"...ever

a good write...hope you and your darling child have a wonderful holiday

M

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

2 posted 2005-12-16 07:00 AM

only to lessen me...?

it is though, the way we feel at the time of loss and you have so painfully asserted in this beautifully written poem, describing the tears, heartbreak and pain of it all...
one of many reason why I've chosen to remain single....and I love it.

Hugs to you...

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

3 posted 2005-12-16 07:35 AM

"I am simple,
minds and riddles
and I am trying
to say
in words so ordinary..backwards
lifeless and cold"

You are anything but simple and deserve someone that will appreciate that..

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

4 posted 2005-12-16 08:49 AM

Meg, there is absolutley Nothing simple about you...

YOU are lovely.

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

5 posted 2005-12-16 10:00 AM

I keep
you like
my rare
pinned insect.

Feeling this one, Meg.

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

6 posted 2005-12-16 01:22 PM

i hate what you're feeling, but i'm l@ving how you've written them out..

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

7 posted 2005-12-17 02:53 PM

I echo Raph....

Meg

another for my library

m xx

how i would love you, love you as no one ever did! Die and still, love you more. And still love you more..and more
~Neruda~

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

8 posted 2005-12-17 02:57 PM

What a truly awesome read!

Eric

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

9 posted 2005-12-18 07:22 PM

you get to the heart of it, without pulling punches..cool write

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