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Open Poetry #36
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jinx26
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since 2005-12-12
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0 posted 2005-12-15 10:43 AM


I sat for hours watching the tides.
To try and wash away all that I hide.
I swallow my aching and drown in my tears....
This pain in my heart....
I'm asking the tide to take it away...
With no answer, the day just drifts away.
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1 posted 2005-12-15 11:15 AM

feelin this....

well done.
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2 posted 2005-12-15 12:05 PM

With no answer, the day just drifts away.

I have had many days drift just like this,
without the answers coming when it seemed I needed them most. Thankfully, the answers usually come, in there own sweet time even if it isnt always soon enough.
Very well done.
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