Open Poetry #36 |
for a friend |
MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
i want you to know that i am here~ trying to understand your pain = your fear~ i listen to what you say~ but excuses wont change what you need they only delay~ so much anger that it has blown out any light to reason~ there seems to be no way of pleason~ youve closed your door~ yet expect love and more~ but how can it enter~ when a mind stays locked in self center~ please dont take this wrong~ i do understand your pain and your sad, sad, song~ i see in you what i have left behind~ i am not saying your mean nothing of the kind~ but for changes to take place~ takes more than a smile on ones face~ one needs to think and see a different way~ its called reality not a game or denial but emotions with understanding and accepting others mistakes and words not word play~ you dont know how others feel or what there thinking about~ assuming all the answeres without asking or listening you judge guilty without a doubt~ your pain and fear keeps love out~ i do understand i have been there but now i am here so lets take a different route~ we all have needs we all have some pain~ we all have cried tears that pour like rain~ i pray for you each night and day~ for some peace and understanding and forgiveness to come your way~ so please dont take this wrong~ for once i am trying to be a friend and help you sing a better song~ addictions in life can take a toll~ creating lonliness, as you become less of who you are, in your self defeating role~ i am sorry if my words might hurt~ but your a person, a friend, not just dirt~ i care~ so with you my heart and soul and time i share~ remember i am here for you~ when your ready i will do what it takes to help you make it through~ another day~ a different way~ please forgive me for what i had to say~ but your important to me and a friend i want you to stay~ My spirit will rise above the sea~ There will be no drowning of my soul or me~ |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
it is wise to not compromise your identity simply to belong...this to me, is a caring friend, and when I'm wrong, or have said things to someone that have hurt, unaware of what I have done, I'd surely prefer my friends to tell me so, talk it over. At least you then know, where your coming from, and hurt/anger doesn't build, so so many people don't want to correct they're problems, but want to continue complaining about they're mistakes...and this, to me, rings out true friendship, but much more, unconditional love...allowing this person to decide but letting them know, your there for them... Incredible, adding, I hope this person realizes the treasures in your heart. Hugs for this lovely read |
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D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
Very well thought out poem. I liked "but for changes to take place~ takes more than a smile on ones face~" among some other parts. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
MGROVES A friend tells you what you should hear A lover just wants you to be near. An excellent write. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Marcia~ This is a beautiful, caring piece~ 'i do understand i have been there but now i am here so lets take a different route~' YOU are a friend to be cherished~ Love you, I do~ ~*Marge*~ ~*No matter what I search for ... |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
thanks, i hope she understands. My spirit will rise |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
thanks i hope he sees the light this time My spirit will rise |
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