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Open Poetry #36

thank you

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

0 posted 2005-07-17 01:07 PM

again, the castaway survives

(a relentless tide pulled me back)

over the crested waves I was swept

(willingly)

but for the bow of a steady ship
and a grappling hook that wouldn’t quit
I was capsized

I floundered
nearly drowned
within waves of frustration

but to no avail
did I flail against your rescue attempts

Thank you

ctowen
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since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

1 posted 2005-07-17 01:16 PM

Captivating and professional in a merry and gingerly way ... enriching!

               from a true Gilligan at heart ...

                                *  Ct

miscellanea
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since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

2 posted 2005-07-17 01:17 PM

Thank goodness that grappling hook was there! Enjoyed this.

miscellanea

Startime55
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since 2003-04-05

Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada

3 posted 2005-07-17 01:21 PM

OH yes....I love this one...filled with the magic of perfect rescue....I am so glad you didn't fight it...**big hugs**

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2005-07-17 07:40 PM

I can relate, in more ways than one

cool write

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

5 posted 2005-07-17 07:45 PM

thanks, friends!

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